WHY DO I FEEL LIKE I DO

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    WHY DO I FEEL LIKE I DO

    2009 is coming up in less than a week

    and my heart is broken into .

    men look at me and all they see is a

    fat woman not the one who sits insides

    with tears rolling down her face

    can men really see with their heart

    about how much they hurt you

    when they say oh you have a sexy body

    but your not good enough to take home to meet my

    mother and family, my heart breaks into

    everytime im siotting here all alone

    and no one know just how much pain im in

    because others seem to matter more

    im not ugly at least i hope im not

    iu do have feeling

    BUT WHO GIVES A DAMN

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    HarverTomsson commented on WHY DO I FEEL LIKE I DO

    04-10-2009

    More like the cry of a paniced swimmer cought in a rip tide than a worl of art. You have pathos and ethos. As one who has spent time alone, believe me when I suggest the fallacy of waitng for someone to come along and complete you. Happens in the movies, don't count on it anywhere else. Set some goals for yourself and reward yourself when you reach them. Invest in others who have/are less than you, and love has a way of redeeming the time lost. Just maybe not romantically.
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