why

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    OUR FINALS ARE NEXT WEEK

    why

     Why do I sit here and do nothing
    I should be studying for finals
    My mom always says "You better get studying"
    I keep putting it off

    Part of me says study in advance
    The other part of me says study the night before
    Though the studying the night before sounds amazing
    I need to pass therefore I study in advance for my exams

    But when exactly does in advance begin?
    Who knows!
    My judgement is telling me a week in advance
    But if I study three nights in advance I might be just as well.

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    AshRenee commented on why

    06-12-2009

    This is funny. It's typical worries, that manage to pour into poetry, and it cracks me up :) I like it. It's simple and easy to understand. Good job
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    jandh4ever

    06/12/2009

    thanks ashlyn

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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