Will You Ever Return
Will You Ever Return
I have just seen you go down the lane.
The gate is closed and you left un-noticed.
When you left without finding me home
With much regret I long for your return.
But will you ever return?
Will You Ever Return
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Tags: Sorrow
Will You Ever Return
I have just seen you go down the lane.
The gate is closed and you left un-noticed.
When you left without finding me home
With much regret I long for your return.
But will you ever return?
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summerbird commented on Will You Ever Return
01-20-2010
- Thank you so much for the read and comment.
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stellar commented on Will You Ever Return
01-18-2010
- You captured the atmosphere of that kind of anxiety...worrying over love ones...and further strengthened by that picture...great write...:)
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