Wish It Were Me...

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    Wish It Were Me...

    Wish it were me instead of you,
    Cause I can't imagine you leaving this earth
    with a lifetime not through.

    Your the heart of this family; always have been,
    still can't believe it all cming to an end.

    There's not a lot we can do, so I've been told.
    But we can comfort and pray for a few more days with you.

    Still I can't imagine what's going through your mind; wish
    it were as easy as saying your going to be fine...

    I know we all need to be strong in your time of need,
    but it's hard seeing someone leave.

    All the more reason I wish it were me, cause it's just not your time
    it can't be...

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    acurtis5 commented on Wish It Were Me...

    09-27-2009

    I too lost someone way too soon and when she died our faimily fell apart so I love the way you put those feelings into perspective great job!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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