Wishes

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    The message I am attempting to share is the fact that wishes are symbols of discontentment. Let wishes leave with discontentment.

    Wishes

    Eyes close
    And amidst hopeful concentration,
    Donned in the setting sun’s array,
    Dandelion seeds take flight,
    Carried by a mouth’s blow.

    View of many things God-given fades As every seed in the distance
    *
    Wishes
    *
    Lips whispering; quivering
    Coin in hand, then — plink.
    A penny’s copper face meets
    The surface of stagnant, algae-ridden water far below.

    A face peers down the well’s mouth,
    To no avail,
    Not a trace of the sleek coin.

    In the well’s cool musty depths,
    Every gift is hidden.
    In her dark recesses,
    As light fleeting,
    Every blessing’s forgotten.
    *
    Hands fold expectantly,
    Gaze locks on a shooting star.
    The heart’s aspirations
    Muttered under breath
    Secret longings,
    Never to reach a human ear.

    Trailing behind,
    Diffusing into the deep unpromising night sky,
    The star’s trail lingers only to vanish.
    With the tail, thankfulness ascends into Space eternal,
    Poof,
    Vanish.
    *
    Every heart’s discontentment
    Manifest in a wish,
    Must be let go.
    Whoosh,
    Lost in the wind.
    Plink,
    Abandoned in the dark depths.
    Let wishes,
    Testimonies of discontentment diffuse into the night sky, Ascend into space eternal,
    Poof,
    Vanish.

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    seedsofgrowth commented on Wishes

    02-15-2019

    Dear Cesar, Commendable and thought provoking! (p.s. I'm new and still stumbling around in order to discern how things work on this site. lol ) pam

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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