Within

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    Within

    Awkwardness, bliss, unfulfilled fantiseys....untouchable kiss.
    Empty hands a warming touch beautiful words never spoken much.
    A short time to long, a joyful depressing song here to stay but always gone......moving on takes to long.
    Keeping it cool, a stair crazey fool warming me sweatly insanitys pool....cunning and swift my mind starts to drift pulling me down in my bottomless pit.
    Twisting and turning my heart starts it's urning...knowing me deeply, painfully creeping, feeling the pain take me away hurry i'm waiting....
    .....nothing to say.

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    Phoenix9 commented on Within

    01-29-2009

    very nice,good imagery

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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