"Wondering"

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    • melanie72
    • In our lives -- we must lose something we love, to know what love really is!

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    For that special man of mine

    "Wondering"

                         
                                 Wondering if its real-
                                 or maybe just a dream,
                          Wondering if you could really care-
                               and fall in love with me ?

                            Wondering if your really ready- 
                           to let her walk out of your world, 
                       Wondering if your ready for my love-
                           ready for me to be your girl ? 

                       Wondering if i am taking this to fast-
                         and expecting too much from you,
                   Wondering if i should give you some space- 
                 so you can listen to what your heart says to do,

                      Wondering if i could be the one-
                     the one different from the others,
                        Wondering if i could do it all-
                             and be your only lover ?

                      Wondering if you know how i feel-
                        or how much i need your touch,
                   Wondering if i could have your heart-
                         because i love you so much !    

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    RJK commented on "Wondering"

    02-07-2010

    Yes it's the questions we ask our selfs to try and balance are feelings. Why can't we just know the anserws right? Well what fun would that be. Thats love. I have a poem or two for you look up my sit and see if you can pick them out. you wrote a very honest poem.
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    BeautyPollution commented on "Wondering"

    01-10-2010

    Again Beautifully Written...We must be going through the same waves of emotions some how. Please read these poems I wrote, I would love 2 hear your insight, Flawed Perfection, Rotten Friend Particles, Wizard of Cause, Quiet Scream and Conflict of Intrest, they border along your words.
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