You see me?

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    You see me?



    You see me? I see you.
    Like a pain in my neck.
    A crack of my nuckles
    That bone that love to pop!
    Like the love I have for you in my heart.
    Thats whats real.

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    Sweetlily commented on You see me?

    03-27-2009

    i like it very much...except it kind bothered me that nuckles didnt have a "k" it is spelt knuckles.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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