You Took Me Over

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    You Took Me Over

    Just when I thought I had my life in control,
    You took me over heart, body, and soul.
    You took all the love that I had left,
    And put it through your "heartbreaking test."

    You say that you love me; but deep down inside,
    Do you have another love you're trying to hide?
    Do you really love me like you say you do?
    Or are you just saying it because I say it to you?

    Is your love true is it really sincere?
    I need to know the answer but I'm so afraid to hear.
    All that I ask is, "Please don't lie."
    Don't build-up my love while I watch your's die.

    If you don't love me, please tell me so.
    I'd rather be hurt then never to know.
    Just remember I love you with all of my heart.
    I will till the end like I have from the start.

    Remember my love so undying and true;
    For it was made so free and especially, for you.
    Now think about it Darling before you decide;
    Because once I go, it's for the rest of your life.

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    charmlessman2d commented on You Took Me Over

    06-26-2010

    you killed me with that last final line. the perfect icing on the cake. These words ring so true for im sure so many in long relationships wondering and doubting, and questioning the others love. i could see why you were published. you have a natural flow for words that glue together and capture the emotion and story all the way through. great job.

    Earthmother commented on You Took Me Over

    10-03-2009

    I am wondering when you wrote this. Although I liked it...it seemed a little juvinile compared to some of your other pcs. I've read. Still like it!!

    stephenmichael commented on You Took Me Over

    04-10-2009

    A beautiful peom from the heart...Watching thier love die for you hurts more than any thing I know...Been thier...Ask,Study thier actions and know who you are...Stephen 10

    WordSlinger commented on You Took Me Over

    04-03-2009

    Nice poem I gave this a 9 I really like these lines All that I ask is, "Please don't lie." Don't build-up my love while I watch your's die.

    HarverTomsson commented on You Took Me Over

    02-19-2009

    Simply, elegant, honest, passionate. Whoever has your heart is a lucky, lucky man.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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