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    You

    You are the one,
    My feelings for you have just begun.
    The first call to you,
    Was the best thing I could do.

    Your beautiful blonde hair and green eyes,
    Without you, how could I possibly survive?
    When I tell you things, you say you heard it all.
    When you say that, you’re bouncing my heart as if it’s a ball.
    You’re so beautiful in every way,
    When I see you, I don’t know what to say.

    There’s so much more about you that words can’t even say, not even coming from me,
    I’m crazy for you and always will be.
    You put a smile on my face every second of the day.
    It seems as if you will be in my life to stay.

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    elieon602 commented on You

    01-25-2015

    Fucking hate myself for writing this crap...ughh I hate her so much, thanks but well, I need to stop thinking of this craziness, its not even her cheating, its everything else then on top of that she takes the lil bit of heart I have left and throws it around lik if she was playing dodgeball. If only I knew, I woulda dodge but instead I caught it and got her out, lucky for me out of my life. First jew I dated was her.

    tinkbabey commented on You

    04-17-2009

    thats really sweet. and kool at the same time.

    Footprints2002 commented on You

    04-14-2009

    awwwww

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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