Your Love
Your love is so sweetIt smells just like flowers
Although you do think about him
Past the hours
And when he has to go
You cry
Just as you start to say goodbye
Your Love
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I wrote this poem when i was about 9 years old for my mom and her boyfriend.
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Photojan12 commented on Your Love
09-22-2009
- Nice. Young live can be sad because it's a new experience. It's sadder if your watching someone else going through it.
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