100% Me..

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    • is already having a GREAT day!! Hope it stays that way!!

    100% Me..

     U say it's all my fault but i say it's urs too...oh what a tangled web we've weaved.
    I want u back...u wanna come back too, but we're both afraid we're gonna loose.
    Who makes the first step... who ends up giving in in the end?
    Neither of us should feel like we're givin' in to anything but the deep deep love we have for each other within.
    I say i want u to b the only man i kiss from now until my life comes to an end, but all u want me to do is take the blame for being the reason y we ended...
    do u really want to do us again...it's not always clear...
    but i refuse to loose something so dear...so precious...cause i was too afraid to really show u how i feel.
    Baby please forgive me...it was 100% Me!

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    SILKYTWEED commented on 100% Me..

    08-19-2009

    Ahhh, this a Beautiful Write and a real talk expression of holding onto someone and something so dear, that you assume full responsibility when it might not necessarily be all your fault...I feel you on this...Thanks! ONE
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    tonguetied

    08/27/2009

    Thanks for your comment...it meant a lot. For me, just knowing that I am not alone in the world of love and lose/loosing...especially when it comes to taking all the blame. In the relationship I was writing about, I didnt feel that it was all me, but in the end...does it really matter...thanks.

    tonguetied

    08/27/2009

    Thanks for your comment...it meant a lot. For me, just knowing that I am not alone in the world of love and lose/loosing...especially when it comes to taking all the blame. In the relationship I was writing about, I didnt feel that it was all me, but in the end...does it really matter...thanks.

    dirty1flavor commented on 100% Me..

    08-03-2009

    the losts we loose for the things we do the costs me and you paid so often so often so often given up like offering so often the costs more losts are loses no one care to lose When we've both suffered losts who choose who lose I refuse so until then i'm glue THe winners golden rule
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    dirty1flavor commented on 100% Me..

    08-03-2009

    enjoyed your writing look forward to reading more
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    Tempy commented on 100% Me..

    07-31-2009

    this is sweet, never give up anything you want to stay around no matter the pride
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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