15 SECONDS

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    15 SECONDS

    A FAR AWAY VOICE, COMING THROUGH THE LINE
    NO OTHER CHOICE, PRETEND EVERYTHINGS' FINE.
    I TRY NOT TO BE DOWN, OR SHOW MY RAGE
    THOUGH YOU ARE BOUND & TRAPPED IN A CAGE.
    WE TALK OF THINGS THAT REALLY DON'T MATTER
    THE JOY IT BRINGS, THIS SOUND OF CHATTER.
    THE RELIEF I FEEL, THOUGH MY HEART BEATS FAST,
    TO KNOW YOU ARE REAL, HEARING YOUR VOICE AT LAST.
    A FAR AWAY SMILE SWEEPS THROUGH THE PHONE
    AND JUST FOR AWHILE, YOU ARE NOT ALL ALONE.
    THEN A STRANGE VOICE, "YOU HAVE ONE MORE MINUTE."
    IT'S NOT OUR CHOICE BUT WE NOW MUST END IT.
    THE CLOCK TICKS AWAY, NO TIME TO CRY
    BARELY TIME TO SAY ONE LAST GOOD BYE
    CONTROLED BY A VOICE, AS MY HEART BECKONS
    THE NEW RECORDED CHOICE " YOU HAVE 15 SECONDS"
    I TRY TO LET YOU GO, BEFORE THE PHONE GOES DEAD
    CAUSE I HATE THAT YOU KNOW, LIKE I ALWAYS SAID
    BUT I GOT TO SEND YOU HOPE, ATLEAST AS BEST I COULD
    IT CAME THROUGH THE WIRE ROPE, JUST LIKE I SAID IT WOULD
    I LOVE YOU MY SON, FOR YOU ARE MY LIFE LINE
    SO DON'T YOU WORRY NONE, CAUSE EVERYTHING IS JUST FIINE!

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    kenparme commented on 15 SECONDS

    04-24-2009

    There is a lot of emotion in this poem.You bring out how sadness and joy are so entwined.

    HeavenlyAngel commented on 15 SECONDS

    01-07-2009

    i can feel your sadness

    drewking commented on 15 SECONDS

    01-05-2009

    very well written,

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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