30 seconds tops

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    30 seconds tops

     In one segment of time I saw his life flash befor my eyes,

    I stood there before him and asked him about all the lies.

    He took a moment to reflect through time and answered,
    Never did I take a moment and think of how it would hurt.

    we twist we pull we shake and stop
    he broke my heart in 30 seconds tops.

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    tsgirl commented on 30 seconds tops

    05-25-2009

    30 SECONDS TOP, Girl that is so so good, I just can't find the words to tell you how great your writing is to me, I can just imagine what's after this, so what r you waiting on get to work): tsgirl
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    Liricz

    07/02/2009

    Haha Thank you so much I don't really have t he connections to be a published writer I guess but writing is something I love to do=)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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