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     ppl dnt understand
    why life is so complicating
    they just stand there and pretend nothing is happening
    but inside that person something horrible is happening
    there bleeding inside
    there being torn apart slowly
    by the ppl sarrounding them
    there hurting and noone even knows it
    there being hurt
    crushed by ppl they love
    there screaming for someone to help them

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    ManOnTheMoon commented on help

    10-26-2010

    As we live, so we shall die, from the words we speak to the actions we do, can never describe how we really are, or why we do the things we do, and yet those around seem to think that they know all, when they know nothing at all. Great write.
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    bradford commented on help

    08-03-2010

    the name for that is ignorance and fear as well as not my problem. no one wants to get involved until its too late. i hope you were finally heard.
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    SEVEN commented on help

    07-30-2010

    well that is true with all ppl...some just dont want to admit it...I sometimes feel that way....is why i write poetry to vent my anger on paper instead of on another person...this way i wont get dragged off to jail....ya'know what I mean?....besides, im too pretty to go to jail......wink
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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