A cold hearted, non-emotional person

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    A cold hearted, non-emotional person

    You stood on the doorstep,
    waiting for me,
    when I saw you,
    I smiled,
    for the very first time,
    I greeted you with a warm hello,
    you wrapped your arms around me,
    the warmth of your embrace,
    melted my cold emotionless heart,
    you said you missed me,
    and that you loved me,
    I say it was too long,
    and love wasn't a strong enough word,
    you smile your unforgetable smile,
    but it soon faded,
    my face was emotionless,
    no smile,
    no life in my eyes,
    it bothered you,
    I looked at the ground,
    I feel your hand under my chin,
    you lift my head up,
    and gently brush your lips on mine,
    and then,
    I smiled,
    my eyes glowed with life,
    I was a cold hearted,
    non-emotional person,
    until I met you,
    and we fell in love.

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    DESIRE2INSPIRE commented on A cold hearted, non-emotional person

    07-17-2009

    Very nice! For a 13 year old, you definitely have potential. :) DESIRE2INSPIRE

    Hampton commented on A cold hearted, non-emotional person

    07-17-2009

    Very very nice poem written with the honesty of an open heart

    Gertrude commented on A cold hearted, non-emotional person

    05-24-2009

    Wow! You're writing is beautiful! Sometimes I can't believe that you're 13 yrs old. Especially when I read your work.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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