"A Little Bit More"

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We sometimes seek things that need not be sought. This poem is my idea on that subject.

"A Little Bit More"

Every day we die a little bit more
Bringing us closer…than we were first before.

Opening portholes… in our un-traveled universe
None of which… we had ever known at first.

Smarter and wiser with age…we think we’ve now become
Yet something… still missing in completion of life’s total sum.

To uncover most…when really it is too late
To go and relive life’s past…ones fate.

Not humanly possible to rewind the hands of time
We need to do it right….from the very first line.

But life as we know it…is filled with ups and downs.
Sort of a teaching technique… used by those who’ve passed it on.

So make the best of the time you’ve all been given
It God’s plan for mankind…not sin filled or driven.

But a more loving way to live out ones years
With happiness …joy and love…minus all the heart aches and tears.

By: Linda Winchell
Copyright: 2009

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bluskyinthenite commented on "A Little Bit More"

04-22-2010

Yes make due with what i have. Live and learn. I try my best. Very nice poem i enjoyed. thanks. Off to the gym i go you want to come with..

3274smiles

05/09/2010

Would love to work out with you if I lived closer but I work out in my own home daily. Weights and such. Thanks for reading my poem and making the comment. God Bless, Linda

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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