-A Pretty Mess-

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    -A Pretty Mess-

    Day Starts Out
    She Just Lays There
    Scream and Shout
    A Silent Stare

    Boys&Men
    Her Make-Up On
    So Broken
    All Hope Is Gone

    Thinks Too Much
    Accessories
    Skipping Lunch
    Tries Hard To Please

    Full of Stress
    And Way Too Nice
    A Pretty Mess
    You Want A Slice

    -DAV-

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    chubbc commented on -A Pretty Mess-

    02-23-2010

    i do want a slice lol another great poem from you i loved it
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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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