Inside out and backwards

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  • Happiness
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  • Fantasy
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  • Life
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  • Emotional
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  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    Im single for the first time in five years. Havent yet found someone who can accept me completely. People keep telling me he is out there somewhere, but i think he is running late. I have been wating for him my whole life, jus someone who makes me happy again. Someone to being back my smile. Someone I can be myself completely with who wont leave me. Im no longer looking, just waiting.

    Inside out and backwards

    Lets move on
    from all my flaws
    Lets look on the inside
    and see the cause

    Find it in you
    to love me
    Inside out and backwards
    Ill let you see

    Climb over tht wall
    I built to hide behind
    Wipe the tears
    That have made me blind

    Be so wonderful
    and make me happy
    Inside out and backwards
    Ill let you see

    Im not a bad person
    Im actually good
    See past the outside
    I think you should

    Someone to depend on
    and to care for me
    Inside out and backwards
    I'll let you see

    Take my past
    and know
    Tht its not me
    I hope it shows

    I dnt know you
    but come save me
    Inside out and backwards
    I'll let you see

    Take this heart
    and make it better
    See the love
    in this letter.

    Im waiting
    Come get me
    Inside out and backwards
    I'll let you see

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    bobj27 commented on Inside out and backwards

    05-27-2010

    I really enjoyed the poem, Danielle. You deserve the unconditional love you are dreaming of...
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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