A Romeo's Last words

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    A Romeo's Last words

     My love why did you ever drink that wretched poison?
    It flowed so cunningly through your veins
    piercing your heart, killing your soul
    Your eyes were dimming my love
    Your face grew paler my love
    The poision was draining you my love
    Why did you drink it my love?
    Your answer brought me tears my love
    That the bottle was begging my love
    I want your warmth my love
    So I drink the wretched poison to join you my love

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    wildpendigus commented on A Romeo's Last words

    06-22-2009

    I like this poem kinda reminds me of something I'd say to a lady great minds think a like as you know, but this also could be a great R&B song, the lyrics touch my insides the most it feels really good! by the way I have written a few more poems or lyrics! grecowong@yahoo.com
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