After Midnight

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these moments happen in my dreams i would only like to make them reality

After Midnight

when was it that i said too you my love our souls will forever grow together so let the world know.
when was it that i gazed into your beautiful eyes that made the song cry.
when was it that under the stary night sky above we made love.
when was it that we shared this moment that felt oh so right, it was after midnight

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sh3ism3 commented on After Midnight

09-08-2009

That was short and very sexy! Liked it alot. You should check me out. I just write about real life. The shit i'm currently going though.

landriano

09/22/2009

thank you very much

smoothdame commented on After Midnight

09-08-2009

I like this poem it is sweet and enduring because it is talking about souls growing together and there is something so wonderful about finding a soul mate in another person because the closeness between the two is on another level. It is also romantic because of the night sky.

landriano

09/08/2009

thank you smoothdame it's really part of a story in my life where i once felt like this and would really like too feel it again there's sooo much i'll be posting. thank you much.

landriano

09/08/2009

thank you smoothdame it's really part of a story in my life where i once felt like this and would really like too feel it again there's sooo much i'll be posting. thank you much.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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