All night
Dark eyesBright smile
I want to stay for more than a while
Strong arms
Soft touch
Tender kisses that I love so much
Hot sex
Cool sweat
There's naught of you that I'll forget.
All night
1 Comments
- zalezca
- staritng fresh. looking at life with new meaning and new eyes.
Bright smile
I want to stay for more than a while
Strong arms
Soft touch
Tender kisses that I love so much
Hot sex
Cool sweat
There's naught of you that I'll forget.
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HarverTomsson commented on All night
06-08-2009
- Sweet brevity just misses perfection. A single syllable repeated twice on lines 7 and 8 with a perfect rhyme tightens up this close structured effort. My suggestion according to this theme: hot sex, cool sweat, There's naught of you that I'll forget.
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07/16/2009
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