Alone

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    • ehsrebel12
    • Went ghost hunting last night...still not a believer!

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    I wrote this when my fiance and i broke up.  She broke my heart but it has mended.lol.

    Alone

    I feel sad, I feel alone,
    I felt loved but now it is gone.
    I feel my life has been torn apart,
    but in reality it is just my heart.
    She tore it completely out of my chest,
    and I thought I was the one that knew her best
    I am bleeding, dieing, and crying inside,
    but my love for her I do not hide.
    She can scratch and tear as much as she will,
    but love over powers and that is all I feel.
    As I lay there bleeding and gasping for air,
    I wonder why love can never be fair.
    How can two people who love each other so much,
    hurt the other with a single touch?
    As I lay there thinking I fall into despair,
    and my body takes its last breath of air.
    I fall into emptiness all dark and alone,
    I wonder if she is happy now that I am gone.
    The pain and sadness I felt is gone,
    and now all I fear is being alone.

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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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