Alone?

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    Alone?

    My eyes lock on what I want.....

    Our eyes meet.. Hearts pounding, blood racing...
    I can feel you in my arms, but Im still alone.

    Legs shaking, heavy breathing...
    All I want is you, but you're just a fantasy.

    Hair pulling, neck biting...
    You're in all my dreams, but will you ever be a part of my reality?

    Back scratching, beautiful moaning...
    I thought I knew who I was. I thought I knew what I wanted...

    But now Im more alone than ever..
    I NEED HELP!!

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    HatchetBaby commented on Alone?

    06-02-2010

    haha thankz. tried to get to b a krosz between freaky & sad

    fierydreamer commented on Alone?

    06-02-2010

    i like is vela. a lil freaky lmao but still good :)

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