Alone

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    Alone
    Alone in this room four walls surround me
    Crying in the darkness so nobody can see
    The pain I feel cuts sharper then a knife
    I'm just standing still as this thing passes me by called life
    Does anyone know me can anyone hear me scream
    Somebody please wake me from this nightmare of a dream
    Nobody can see the pain that tears me up inside
    Am I just existing in this shell of a body that has died
    I wish for one person to save me and take it all away
    But for now I'll keep dreaming and wishing for that day

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    speed11935 commented on Alone

    07-13-2009

    Alone seems to be a common theme among the poets here. I wrote one by that name too. Yours seems a brief echo of mine.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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