Ambiguity

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    Ambiguity

    If you could,

    have connected to what I did not say

    If you could,

    have engaged my heart and felt what it longed to play

    If you could,

    have recognize my yearning for sanctuary amidst precariousness


    If you could,

    have known my tears and fears all these years

    If you could

    have me…you would!

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    janetdawson commented on Ambiguity

    03-25-2009

    I think u do very well, i look forward to reading more of your work :)
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    Robb08 commented on Ambiguity

    03-25-2009

    finally, a uniquely powerful piece in which the poet beautifully captures the nuance of ambiguity..."the if you could" gives the poem good rhythm ...the last line - a great sense of longing and depth. Keep writing sister!
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    bandit1192 commented on Ambiguity

    03-25-2009

    With your beautiful words, you gave us a glimpse of who you are. We'll be waiting for more. Good poem. TS
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    turkeyg commented on Ambiguity

    03-25-2009

    i think we all say this to ourselves when dealing with someone. we want them to see or feel or know something without us even saying or showing it to them physically. atleast that is what i got from this poem. i love it. i think you are talented and you have alot more to give to the poetry world. just continue to write and post! i rate this a 10 cause it speaks to me in volumes.
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    Undescribable commented on Ambiguity

    03-23-2009

    Succint and powerful! Your work teases us like your picture. Please don't hold out on us I want to see and read more. Good work!
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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