annoying dads

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    my mom, dad parted and my dad has ben mean to good day

    annoying dads

     sleepy sleepy,
    dad gots no binky to shuot his trap,
    it hacks me down when he calls me a miller,
    I'd rather be a killer than a miller,
    when he me it shuots my trap,
    but he dont so wont i stop complaining about life,
    but it still not fair,
    but do we care,
    it's still something i can't bare

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    copergirl commented on annoying dads

    01-16-2011

    It was my Mom who needed a binky("")...so very well done--you used a sort of reverse simiole--the parent as an infant...keep up the good work--glad to see you here
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    AnnieBug commented on annoying dads

    01-15-2011

    I can relate to this poem because my mom treats me the same way. Love AnnieBug
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on annoying dads

    01-15-2011

    I like this poem because of the metaphoric implications and the deep thoughts. It is very good.
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