Bye, Bye Auntie

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    I really upset because my aunt died, and I wanted to express my feelings about her.

    Bye, Bye Auntie

     My sister I have already dished her,
    My brother who wants his custard,
    But all I wanted was to see my auntie,
    One more time before she died,
    "Bye, cruel world,"
    She thought,
    As I sighed,
    Mom says death is natural,
    I thought taking a breath was natural,
    And we all know life isn't fair

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-15-2011

    I think this is a wonderful expression of one's self and sad that she had to go.
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    Topaz2011 commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-13-2011

    Deeply expressed of grief...I really enjoyed reading. Thanks! Topaz
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    copergirl commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-13-2011

    How very good. I am seeing so many concepts in the undercurrent of this simple poem which isn't simple at all.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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