Another girls face

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    Another girls face

    Eyes bright as the sun
    She was always so much fun
    On a rainy day she'd shine
    She was always so divine
    Eyes wide like an owl
    Air echoed as she howled
    So much company around
    Yet no one heard a sound
    Tears burning down her face
    But no one seen a trace
    Of one girl who was trapped
    In another girls face

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    jamesbtaylor commented on Another girls face

    03-18-2014

    Great poem!

    TheLastCowboy commented on Another girls face

    03-18-2014

    This comes off as a dark poem, you feel the subject of the write in the dark, and seeing herself as a light in the dark, yet she is not noticed to spite her "shine" in the dark. I'm a little lost on the ending with "in another girls face" what were you telling us the reader in that line?

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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