Aoi Sora, Kaze (Blue Sky, Wind)

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    Aoi Sora, Kaze (Blue Sky, Wind)

    Freedom
    Is it really free?

    We must sacrifice something great, and no man I know of has gone so far as to sacrifice this great thing.

    Tho I, yes a mere boy, have went as far as to cross and come back
    It was such a wonderous thing, tho..I won't trade what I have
    for what It was like to be free.

    Yes It was great, but sadly I am inlove again.
    And I won't disregard my feelings to fly again.

    She is was tethers me to the earth, Tho I cannot be tied here completely
    She has what she can hold, and I, will not become the wind anytime soon.

    Yes, love is a great thing to sacrifice, and without it,
    man is just a normal primate, but we do have it.
    And we continue to prospure because of it.

    I lost it and flew for what seems like milinia, but when i returned
    it had only been 2 years, what is it like to cross over?

    Its...something you must experiance yourself, just remember to come back in the end.

    Because being human has its purpose.

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    ErikatheVampire commented on Aoi Sora, Kaze (Blue Sky, Wind)

    09-23-2009

    wow this one is so beautiful. i was unaware that you could put so much passion into words. LOVED IT!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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