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    Note this " : " means repeat. If your in band or took band, I don't have to explain it. If its " :: " it means repeat the whole thing. So the first two paragraphs you repeat each time you read the " Poem/Song". You read the "Song" twice.

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    its more or less a song... o.o idk.


    ::The wind is so cold, and yes I'm crying.
    I wish you were here.
    Because I'd trade my soul to be with you.
    And nothing will change my mind.


    The wind isso cold, and yes I'm crying.
    I wish she~ was here.
    And I wish, I was with her.
    Why is it when, they are the world.
    You are nothing but a rain drop to the ocean.:

    Things are so cruel.
    Yet when we live, we grow stronger from this pain.
    Its out of our hands, and we just fall hopelessly inlove.
    Again.

    What is that, you wish for, when I'm not around.
    What will you do, when I'm gone.
    Because when I leave, I'm not coming back.

    This wind is cold, and yes I'm crying.
    But baby this time its for you.
    And I'm not letting go again.
    So don't think your getting rid of me.

    Because your my world, and I'm your ocean.
    And baby I'll rain, for you anyday.:

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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