arms of a angle

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    arms of a angle

    In the arms of an angel
    I try and untangle
    My love for you
    So it will be true
    That I love you

    I realize the angle is you
    So that makes it true
    We could work through
    The long over due
    Love for you

    You’re in the arms of the angel
    If you untangle
    Your love for me
    That u don’t see
    In your so called heart
    Where I should be

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    bluewolf commented on arms of a angle

    08-27-2009

    It is sweet to see a young man who is in tune with his emotions and shares them equally as well. Beautiful work young man. Keep up the excellent work!

    FreedomFromFear commented on arms of a angle

    08-24-2009

    I really like this one. The rhyming and everything is really good and the emotion is also really well written. :)

    melki18 commented on arms of a angle

    08-22-2009

    aww... i love yet another one. This is really sweet. Whatever girl you're writing these for is very lucky to recieve suck compliments and encouragment.

    Terryalan commented on arms of a angle

    08-22-2009

    I like this one, very real and hits a cord on the emotions. You know even though we are all different we all share exactly the same set of emotions in varying degrees, Nice work!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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