As I pull the Trigger

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    As I pull the Trigger

    I close my eyes, and hide in discise.....Tryin to hide from the truth.....You said goodbye, and watched me cry.....Yet not a word from your mouth....
    I shal say good-bye, one last time, to the love I lost, I say good night as I pull the trigger thats pressed against my head......In dismay, I pull it away, and pray you will stay..... But then I remember the love you filled with lies, so I open my eyes, and watch you walk away....
    I say goodbye, one last time, to the love i lost, I say goodnight as I pull the trigger and stab my heart.......
    I feel a sharp pain enter thoughout my entire body.....I scream in agony, and pray that everything will be ok..... I look at you in dismay, and disregard the things you say.......You no longer love me, or who I always will be.....You no longer care, and Im no longer there.....
    So I say good-bye one last time, to the love I lost, I say good night as I pull the trigger that is my fate, and realize Im not here...... You open your eyes, with a look on your face, you can not belive what happend..... You say poor thing, you say so many things......Yet you do not seem to care..... You stare in amazement as you watch my freashly mutalated body fall to the ground....You think its a dream, and close your eyes, trying to be in discise....But I do not seem to wake.....You shake, and you scream, as you regret everything......But now Im gone, and you will move on, w/o a doubt in your mind, that you can never love me again.....
    So close your eyes, and say good-bye, to the love you let fly.....Close your eyes, and say good-night cuz when morning comes, You will realize, it is me you are missing, but now its to late.....Im flying high above, and watching you ruin your life, second by second.....Day by day......And I shed one last tear, as my comotose begins to fade, and I am now in Heavin where I belong!!!

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    dahlusion commented on As I pull the Trigger

    02-19-2009

    This is a good "tale" with a lot of vivid imagery, and, this is a dense mass of words in that it could be expressed with less. It reads more like a short story instead of a lyrical poem. There is a diamond in the mountain here. Mine for it.

    magicmanzz commented on As I pull the Trigger

    02-05-2009

    good job i enjoyed it immenesly

    Phoenix9 commented on As I pull the Trigger

    01-09-2009

    very good

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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