Autumn's Bed-time Story

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    Autumn's Bed-time Story
    Autumn’s Bed-time Story

    Goldenrod, in Autumn nod…
    Consulting with the breeze.
    Evening shadows come to dance
    Sweet ballet amidst the trees.

    Sunsets cast a warm, rose glow
    On horizon’s starlight climb,
    Rows of sillouetted trees
    Swaying side-to-side in time…

    Bullfrogs call a slow, sad song,
    Fireflies flicker secret code.
    Crickets chirp a fevered pitch…
    Autumn’s bed-time story told.

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    SavVySam commented on Autumn's Bed-time Story

    08-06-2009

    I agree with Lena-This poem has beauty and rhythm! Nice Job!
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    LenaMP commented on Autumn's Bed-time Story

    04-10-2009

    Flows well, sweet and warm, shows imagination and good rhythm.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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