Awaken

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  • Confusion

    Awaken

    My thoughts flow wildly
    Like a torrential river
    Recklessly raging as I writhe to escape
    My mind is constantly escaping my body
    But, my body can't quite ever seem to escape my mind
    I always feel like I'm awake when I'm dreaming
    Yet, I feel as if I'm always dreaming when I'm awake
    I fervently flee from the facade of reality
    And, emphatically embrace my ellusive illusions
    If I wake up, will everyone disappear?
    If you wake up, will I disappear?

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    ndg commented on Awaken

    01-16-2009

    Can honestly relate.....

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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