BAD FEELINGS

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BAD FEELINGS

I HAVNT HAD A GREAT TIME WITH YOU BUT MAYBE WE CAN FIX THAT
MAYBE WE COULD COME TOGETHER AND DISCUSS WHAT WE DID WRONG AND FORGIVE AND FORGET
WHAT WE DECIDE I HAVE YET TO THINK ABOUT BECAUSE WE HAVENT TALKED SINCE I DONT KNOW HWEN
MAYBE YOU DONT WANT TO FIX THIS FEUD BETWEEN US AND THAT WILL ONLY MAKE IT WORSE
I HOPED WE COULD HAVE BEEN FRIENDS AFTER THE FIGHT BUT YOU SAY YOU HAVE TOO MANY FRIENDS ALREADY AND
YOU SAY YOU DONT NEED ME
WHAT AM I TO DO WITHOUT YOU? MAYBE MOVE ON
I WANT TO WORK IT OUT BUT I GUESS HERE IS MY GOOD BYE TO YOU AND MAYBE YOU SHOULD SAY GOOD BYE TOO

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Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

11-10-2010

Jordan just checking in precious and reading you again; something if those who hurt us are unwilling, not ready and/or perhaps unable due to their limitations to make things right and find resolve...sometimes we have to look within ourselves to make peace with a situation and/or someone and find the courage to move on...things will get better honey, they do and they will...have faith. Peace, Love and Light

Jordan98

11/11/2010

thanx for the confidence

Olan01 commented on BAD FEELINGS

11-10-2010

Thank you for writing this Jordan for we all have to write; it is what we do. You are young and hope you are feeling better, now.

Kanicki commented on BAD FEELINGS

11-06-2010

Good Job Jordan - carthartic poetry we all need to write and read. Yes Jordan, the proper thing to do is have resolve; sometimes folks aren't mature enough to do the right thing...some you say farewell and some you say Goodbye. I wish you the best. Peace, Love and Light

Jordan98

11/08/2010

i just write what i feel soetimes it just depends what i am felling on that day

Chaos128 commented on BAD FEELINGS

11-06-2010

Very affecting thoughts, J. All you can do is make the opportunity for reconciliation available. After that it's up to whomever the opportunity is offered. I hope it works out.

Jordan98

11/08/2010

inspiration came from my ex boyfriends

jessicanichole8 commented on BAD FEELINGS

11-05-2010

that is so wrong hey i love u buddy. i will always be there for u

Jordan98

11/05/2010

thanx jess ur aleays there for me

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Jordan98’s Poems (16)

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MY DAD AND I 13
BAD FEELINGS 25
IM YOURS, AND IM IN LOVE WITH YOU 5
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what it feels like to be stood up 2 times in a row 3
when times are hard 6
love is sharing.... 10
jordan98 6
you will pay for what you took from me and my life 2
What Does Life Mean To Me 5