Behind Closed Doors

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Behind Closed Doors

As we grew up everyone thought that we had the perfect family, but when we where behind closed doors there was a different type of family to be seen.  I smile to the outside world, but behind closed doors I scream, with all my might for guidance and the strength to go on for another day.  My mother was one to smile to the world when she was in public, but behind closed doors, she was to weak to hold herself up to look in a mirror.  We portrayed the prefect children, but behind closed doors, we fought for every inch of what we had. Mother played the role of a good parent, but behind closed doors, she would tell us we are nothing and make us feel like it too.  Now we have all grown up and have families of are own and behind closed doors we show them more love and light then we show in public. This is to let you know that even though bad things can happen behind closed doors, sometimes good things come from the darkness please don’t have any closed doors.

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brokenhearted11 commented on Behind Closed Doors

06-22-2010

its great! and like syd said, it has s certain flow. love it! keep writing! :)

Chigger2069

06/22/2010

i have much more to write wait and see

Sydney commented on Behind Closed Doors

02-19-2010

wow. this is great. its sad and has a great flow to it.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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