Behind the Smile.

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    Behind the Smile.

    Everyday she wakes
    She looks in the mirror,
    She is disgusted by what she sees.
    She cannot see what he loves.

    She hides everything behind makeup and a smile.
    Only he knows what she feels.
    He knows whats behind the smile.
    She still cannot see what he loves.

    Everyday he calls her just to tell her that he loves her.
    He promises to always be there.
    Everyday she cries for she cannot show him how much she cares.
    She still cannot see what he loves.

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    bandit1192 commented on Behind the Smile.

    01-28-2009

    I agree with kenparme. It went to a nine for me. Good job. TS

    kenparme commented on Behind the Smile.

    01-23-2009

    I tried to give this a nine but it wouldn't do it. I call this an emotionally active read-it holds me the whole way through--Very good.

    lonewolf commented on Behind the Smile.

    01-18-2009

    this one was very well thought out. very well worded and written.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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