BIRTH

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    BIRTH

    I am expecting,
    a gift from the fate
    after lying with aspires.

    The Soul is pretending
    as it is sleeping
    may be so, the flying
    ambitions ignored everyone

    And now I am the only one
    who gave Birth without Labour Pain !
    The Creation was not a boy
    not a girl too
    then?

    An absentminded Dream...

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    kesavkavumthara commented on BIRTH

    04-05-2010

    Really new presentation...a nice poemby all its virtues...

    Balu commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    Idea and technique and presentation are good, feels more ways to strand.. Reminds Japaneese Haiku poems... "when two bubbles meet they unite together a lotus blossoms.."

    Unni commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    Good Poem !!! Congratulations... keep it up... All the Best

    gireeshas commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    nice poem... symbols are qute and answering about dreams... keep it up...

    dileepviswa commented on BIRTH

    07-12-2009

    Good poem. Congratulations! Hope this poet go greater heights!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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