BIRTH

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    BIRTH

    I am expecting,
    a gift from the fate
    after lying with aspires.

    The Soul is pretending
    as it is sleeping
    may be so, the flying
    ambitions ignored everyone

    And now I am the only one
    who gave Birth without Labour Pain !
    The Creation was not a boy
    not a girl too
    then?

    An absentminded Dream...

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    kesavkavumthara commented on BIRTH

    04-05-2010

    Really new presentation...a nice poemby all its virtues...

    Balu commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    Idea and technique and presentation are good, feels more ways to strand.. Reminds Japaneese Haiku poems... "when two bubbles meet they unite together a lotus blossoms.."

    Unni commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    Good Poem !!! Congratulations... keep it up... All the Best

    gireeshas commented on BIRTH

    07-13-2009

    nice poem... symbols are qute and answering about dreams... keep it up...

    dileepviswa commented on BIRTH

    07-12-2009

    Good poem. Congratulations! Hope this poet go greater heights!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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