• Passion


    I am expecting,
    a gift from the fate
    after lying with aspires.

    The Soul is pretending
    as it is sleeping
    may be so, the flying
    ambitions ignored everyone

    And now I am the only one
    who gave Birth without Labour Pain !
    The Creation was not a boy
    not a girl too

    An absentminded Dream...

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    kesavkavumthara commented on BIRTH


    Really new presentation...a nice poemby all its virtues...

    Balu commented on BIRTH


    Idea and technique and presentation are good, feels more ways to strand.. Reminds Japaneese Haiku poems... "when two bubbles meet they unite together a lotus blossoms.."

    Unni commented on BIRTH


    Good Poem !!! Congratulations... keep it up... All the Best

    gireeshas commented on BIRTH


    nice poem... symbols are qute and answering about dreams... keep it up...

    dileepviswa commented on BIRTH


    Good poem. Congratulations! Hope this poet go greater heights!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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