Blossom

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Sudden Inspiration before going to bed! :-D

Listened to: Entheogenic - Pagan Dream Machine

Blossom

Blossoming out towards the sky
The little Flower wishes to fly
Such power lies not in it
But lies in a Bird that carries part of it.
The Dream is not fulfilled
Yet still happened in an unexpected way
To brighten someones day.

The Flower withers 
The Bird leaves forever,
One thing they both wanted 
They received, though Now is gone
Like the wind that ends in nothing,
Yet coming back out from Nothing

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Kdaddy commented on Blossom

09-08-2009

A beautiful poem, a short sweet story of a short life. Then rebirth. Good job.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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