BLUE EYES

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    BLUE EYES

                                             blue  eyes
    As I look into your eyes so blue,
    I knew right then and there i was in love with you.
    So warm and kind as I always dreamed,
    It was as good as i thought it seemed.
    I love your warm lips on mine,
    That tasted better than the best of wine.
    Then you toched me and it felt so right,
    When you made love to me all night.
    I'll never feel that way ever again,
    Cause you are the best of friends.

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    charles52 commented on BLUE EYES

    02-04-2010

    Old topic told so well it is new, good for you. I liked many of your lines. Smart, to the point, and very clean. Nice write. Charles

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