born in the darkness

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    born in the darkness

    i was born in the darkness.
    with only claws and fangs to defend my self.
    i travl the path with only a sword on my back.
    i return to this one place again and again.
    is it becuse of this girl.
    i fight off the darkness.
    even though i'm hurt.
    she holds me close.
    and i know everythings going to be ok.
    i smile even in the darkest of moments.

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    ceceila commented on born in the darkness

    12-16-2009

    wow why so deep huh is there something wrong with life also i tried calling but there is something with your phone whats with that nd i gave u my number call me once gosh u say im ur angel but u treat me like a stranger wats wrong did i do something that made u stop talking to me or somehting like that if so then tell me so i wont offend you again.
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    Paolo commented on born in the darkness

    06-01-2009

    This poem has the essence of a great piece and with a little, I do mean little editing would be that great poem.
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    ladynight commented on born in the darkness

    05-27-2009

    i liked it. it's like you left a part of yourself in your poem. it's dark but there's a light at the end of the tunnel so to speak.
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    mistyparish commented on born in the darkness

    05-15-2009

    That was short and sweet, I liked it. 10 here.
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    jmylez commented on born in the darkness

    05-13-2009

    good job man
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    thedarkpoet

    02/25/2010

    thanks guys ^_^

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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