BOUND -N- HUNG

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    BOUND -N- HUNG
    Wanting it all The future seems so far away. No master gods to call We are insane! Lost it all The insanity made those towers fall I can't take this pain The deadly confines of hell's where we remain. The dead are chasing me Reaching stretching close to grabbing me skeletons of commitment Descisions disembowled The killjoy of the noose A holocaust of my disception The 6x9 stone cold cell the blood lust I laugh at his hell Bound n hung!

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    am2anangel commented on BOUND -N- HUNG

    06-09-2009

    interesting piece I especially like the line about skeletons of commitment. I think we sometimes feel trapped in our commitments and almost stalked by them. nice work.
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    RATTMAN316

    05/24/2010

    thank you! that is the point i was trying to make.. its one of my favorate pieces to date... kinda gives everyone old and young something we can all connect with.. thanks for the complement..

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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