Break the Beast

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Break the Beast

Living wild and running free
life is trying to kill me
if it's not a long cool drink
then it's a hot legged woman to sink

I've got to try and break the beast
too many pills
playing the deals
I've got to try and break the beast

another call and here I go
it's all part of the late night show
center stage is black leather heather
she really wants us to get together

I've got to try and break the beast
too many pills
playing the deals
I've got to try and break the beast

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optimistic commented on Break the Beast

07-03-2009

I see some similarity in certain lines of how we write yet I see more power in your piece by the force of words, very greatly said.

poetrygal45 commented on Break the Beast

07-03-2009

I've read through your poems. You are very passionate with the pen. I enjoyed myself while I read you.....

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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