Breathe*

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    its not good..but its my first..

    Breathe*

    why do you stay when you just want to leave?
    is it me you are trying to deceive?
    every laugh
    every tear
    every month
    every year
    do you really love me like you say you do?
    or are you just waiting on someone new?
    every frown
    every smile
    every inch 
    every mile
    but i cant help the way
    you just take my breath away..

     

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    xXxJustMexXx commented on Breathe*

    04-15-2010

    wow!! boo* that is amazing!! i love it so much!! its just so...sweet and loving haha its what i would expect from u

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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