Seeing Heaven*

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Seeing Heaven*

In the auditorium
quiet and shy
i looked at the stage
and i saw heaven.

in the hallway
new and nervous
i looked in a doorway
and i saw heaven.

in the classroom
smart and funny
i looked to my right
and i saw heaven.

on the bus
loud and exuberant
i looked right beside me
and i saw heaven

in my room
quiet and cautious
i looked in my heart
and i saw heaven.

i saw you. 

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xXxJustMexXx commented on Seeing Heaven*

04-19-2010

aww haha i love this , like said at school lol, but yah, the picture really makes this poem really meaningful :)

xXxNoNormalxXx

04/20/2010

thanks boo* haha(: thanks.. it my favorite pic...(:

Tempy commented on Seeing Heaven*

04-17-2010

how beautiful is this. The sentiment is almost perfection. I loved it

xXxNoNormalxXx

04/18/2010

thankyou..*blushing*

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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