Broken Link

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  • Donna
  • havent been here in soo long!! miss my poetry!! its my life!!

Broken Link

The world I know is harsh and cold-
The temperature always falling.
The look of hatred in her eyes,
Could send a child crawling.
She could break you heart and spirit
Without a single word.
But words and blows are all she knows-
And you can't believe what I've heard.
Fighting back is al I have left
To keep my head held high.
Though as wrong as it seems to me,
I feel I have the right.
Who do I have to defend me,
When I only trust in me?
Why can't anyone open their eyes,
To see what I have seen?
My thoughts sometimes get scary,
When I think of my innocent son.
Is this chain broken with me
Or has this just begun?
It is up to me to finish this
And change what our future holds.
We are a product of our pasts,
But we can always change our molds.
The world I knew was harsh and cold
But the temp is slowly rising.
Because when I look into his eyes-
There's sunshine in our horizon!

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HarverTomsson commented on Broken Link

06-12-2009

This has single mother written al over it. And the woman? A mother in law, a teacher, a grandmother, or someone else? Doesn't matter, you've revealed enough for me to want to stand up and cheer, for both of you!

Tempestlady commented on Broken Link

06-08-2009

I loved it! I can relate so much even down to seeing my own sons eyes. Could just use a little polish with the way it flows when you read it out loud. Excellent work, inspiring and heartfelt and intelligent.

lonewolf commented on Broken Link

04-21-2009

Another great poem, full of inspiration. You are a true artist. I love your work

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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