Broken

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Broken

You broke my heart once,

It got better with time,

You broke my heart again,

I got over you just fine,

I wish i knew how to spend more than one or two weeks with a guy,

Because my heart cant handle any more lies.

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NBParis commented on Broken

07-26-2011

I agree with my friend Windsongs, also as a guy, not all of us lie. I'm sorry you have had to deal with those losers. Your poem is a great expression of your pain. You write well, keep them coming. Peace.

dakotabarnett

07/26/2011

well thank u very much i have alot of poems just not much time to put them on here

windsongs commented on Broken

07-25-2011

the remants of a broken heart lie in the warmth of a sleeping bag!!!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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