Candy Covered Misery

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Candy Covered Misery

Don't trust him,
He is a cheater,
He lives double lives,
No time for heaters.

Run away right now,
Do it carefully,
You need ro understand,
He is a candy covered misery.

Maybe he should think
before he cheats,
with you, that would be bad,
Does he wants beats?

He is a condy covered misery!

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bigred commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-28-2010

I like this, but I think more could have been written here. Great heading for the poem. No one deserves a cheater. Useless. Misery loves company anyway Nice Job here.

Teardrops commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-24-2010

you use candy to discribe this person very well loved the poem thank s for the read Marie

Po8ree commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-24-2010

A beautifully written poem full of raw emotions, showing the pain

Springsize commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-23-2010

Absolute creativity here... --- "candy covered misery" ...

Rhymer commented on Candy Covered Misery

09-23-2010

Like biting into a piece of chocolate and finding a garlic filling, enjoyed the read and the metaphors. Nice piece.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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