Please Excuse Me

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    Please Excuse Me

     Please excuse me for I am lame,
    I have no feeling and people hate me,
    I also don't like my life that much for
    I don't even know who to be.

    For, myself is boring,
    I am a shame,
    I know that my poetry stinks,
    And I know that it is lame.

    I don't want to show my face,
    For if I do, there will be a disgrace.

    I don't want to cry but I have to,
    My sister hates me and probably you.

    To I don't desereve to live anymore,
    please tell me to leave,
    I won't cry with feelings hurt,
    for I know things are like feelings free.

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    bigred commented on Please Excuse Me

    09-28-2010

    Not quite sure what this poem is suppossed to mean, nor do I get it's intent. But what I do get is that you unfortunately are not a happy person. Sorry this just does not make sense to me.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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